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zzz zzz zzzz z zzz
--Kirk Thu, 22 Jun 2006 05:01:25 +0000
For the record that was supposed to be a counter haiku, not a commentary on EB's posts.
--Kirk Thu, 22 Jun 2006 17:04:15 +0000
your counter haiku
rendered my haiku defunct
now, here is revenge
----EB Thu, 22 Jun 2006 18:38:32 +0000
You call that revenge???
Baby'd make more of a fight!
"Evil" B, my butt!
--Kirk Thu, 22 Jun 2006 20:21:41 +0000
fatal wound bleeding
haiku powers slip away
FoSO, avenge me!
----EB Fri, 23 Jun 2006 00:54:53 +0000
how can i resist
this appeal to save the day?
prep for a smack down!
dude, comparing babe
to dad is a real low blow
to the proud papa
let's keep this friendly
by now you know that i'm the
mistress du haiku
--FoSO Fri, 23 Jun 2006 15:33:12 +0000
here we go again..
but wait, what is this about
eliza dushku?
--miller Fri, 23 Jun 2006 18:31:05 +0000
that babe's a hottie
sho' nuff. don't get me started
on that bare midriff!
--FoSO Fri, 23 Jun 2006 19:38:49 +0000
oh all you people
recall the names of celebs...
all alike to me
except madonna...
sweet "sex"-era madonna
sweet sweet madonna
--Kirk Fri, 23 Jun 2006 20:01:03 +0000
dude, your sad haiku
mojo is getting me down
do NOT repeat words!
--FoSO Fri, 23 Jun 2006 21:09:19 +0000
poetic device!
("i was an english major..."
such a good excuse)
and not only that,
but we have all been lacking
with that "season" thing
--Kirk Fri, 23 Jun 2006 22:30:35 +0000
five syllables here
seven syllables go here
and this line has five.
by definition,
haiku are about nature
but who really cares?
--miller Sat, 24 Jun 2006 05:57:52 +0000
we're in the city
where there's not so much nature
but there's summer heat...
take that!
--FoSO Sat, 24 Jun 2006 13:52:14 +0000
(psst.. your next stanza only has two syllables!)
--miller Mon, 26 Jun 2006 15:37:58 +0000
hee hee!
--FoSO Mon, 26 Jun 2006 16:10:57 +0000
two beats...
not much.
be quick!
--Kirk Mon, 26 Jun 2006 19:21:45 +0000
one fish, two fish
red fish, blue fish..
--miller Tue, 27 Jun 2006 16:51:37 +0000